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The Assassin by Heizui The Assassin by Heizui
Finally finished! :dummy:
Anyway, this is Raine's battle outfit. (Yes, she finally got an 'official' outfit.)

This one took forever! :iconlazycryplz:
But I'm quite happy with it :)

Well, hope you like it anyway! :)

Oh and since this is her battle outfit.. I made a ref for those looking for a challenge >:3
Here it is for those interested: Raine Reference (Updated) by Heizui

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Raine (c) Heizui
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Hello Heizui
This peace of art work is most beautifuly done. The most intreging part that i found most beautiful was her body and how you drew her. She looks like she is real, and her clothes,weapon and the skull they look well design, like the texture and the detail you did to her clothes are remarkable.Her hair is nice and flowy and her wings too. The background is nice. I think you did very wel in the background with all the textures and lightness to darkness,

Therefore this peace that i believe was the best one that you've done and very well presented and you are getting really well with drawing realistic well done ^7^.
What do you think?
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11 out of 11 deviants thought this was fair.

.... and so I decided to write my very first critique.

Hello there fellow artist :3

I've been keeping an eye on your works since only god knows when and I must say you're the kind of artist one would want to work with. you progress at an amazing speed and everytime that happens, you manage to surprise me. This piece of work is the proof of your love to arts and will to learn and get new experiences.

Altho I'm no expert on this I can say your body anatomy knowledge is solid. There are things here and there you need to improve and knowing you I'm certain you will get the hang on that missing tiny bit.

Your ability to combine fatality, sensuality, delicacy and the beautiful of the outfits is explendid. That said, this outfit is well designed combines very well with your character's personality. Her appearance tells me she's a dangerous evil entity I should be wary off yet I see grace and delicacy. A very good paradox.

Since I want to see more outstanding works from you I'll pin point what I found here and there.
Starting from the face, my only critique is on her left eye which should be slightly... just slightly bigger given the angle. The hair is nicely done.
correct me if my eyes are deceiving me on this one but all other entities seem to be using the same light source. The hair however seem to have one of its own.
The nostrils could be bigger. Right now I have the impression she has troubles breathing.

Unless you wanted to give the impression the skull is from a recent "kill", you could add some dust, dirt and cracks on the skull to give a more realistic approach as well as making it lighter. A recent kill skull however would require a subtil trace of blood.

I have no issues with the boots design but I have issues regarding the angle. It seems you drew the details slighly off the angle...The details are forced onto our camera and not hers, if you know what I mean. You can clearly see that on the left leg (hers). The right leg's isnt that noticeable but its still there.
I recommend changing the heels. I have to agree they could come in handy but given the fact she's an assassin those ponty heels could hinder her movements in non friendly terrain. The final decision is yours, this is just my opinion.

Regarding wings' texture, I can say it is nicely done and I'm sure you had your troubles texturing them but, when I look at the texture my head says "fur".My question is if that is intentional or not.

Last but not the least, the background. I looks simple and gives emphasis to the abyss she represents but I noticed you "hurried" painting the area under the knife. That bush looks sloppy and it is interfering with the rest of your well done job.
Dont be in a hurry, take your time as only time makes perfection.

To sum it all up, Well done! I'm looking forward to your next piece.
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untuox Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014
Fantastic digital.
Heizui Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :)
untuox Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014
You wellcome!
evanightwish Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014
I LOVE IT!!!! Clap 
Heizui Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! ^^
LeTheTan Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awesome :(
Heizui Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! :)
Nicbish Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013
WOW!! She is amazing, gorgeous work ♡♡
Heizui Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sweet Jesus, sorry for late reply ;w;
Anyway... Thank you! :)
naiomiasterizk Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist
i love this!! Bunny-Emoji-10-(Emoji-Loved) 
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